Thursday 5 June 2014

WALT ... write the next book

During Shared Reading in the Kea Room we read the book called Stuck by Oliver Jeffers.



This book finished with an open ending. Tim thought it would be a great idea to write the next book.


... watch this space for 
'The Great Idea' by the Kea Class






The writing begins ...
The Great Idea
Hey maties I’ve got a great idea! I’ll grab my cell phone from my pocket and ring the police.
While they were waiting for the police to arrive, the fireman threw everything down from the tree. Except the humongous boat which was just too heavy for the firemen to lift.
Flloyd saw everything on the ground. He got so mad that his face turned red like the reddest tomato, and steam came out of his ears. So, he decided to chuck everything back up angrily.
Stop right there, shouted the policeman. What are you doing?
Floyd turned to see a policeman standing behind him with a taser in his hand. With a cheeky smirk on his face, Flloyd dived for his stumpy fat legs, and before the policeman knew it, he was up in the tree too.
Floyd rang the security guards and asked them to stay at the tree for the night to watch the things in the tree to make sure they didn’t climb or jump down.
Unfortunately the security guards fell asleep at the base of the tree, but were woken with the sound of cracking, crackling, squeaking and other strange noises.
The security guards looked up and saw the tree swaying from side to side. One of them said, oh its fine.
Slowly the tree begins to tip towards the ground, followed by a gigantic boom!
The security guards were squashed under the gigantic trunk and all the people in the tree were then free to run away. The objects in the tree were also free but will still stuck in-between the branches like a net.
But instead of the people running away, they chased after Floyd to catch him and put him behind bars in the cells. Floyd felt scared as he noticed the people become an angry mob and charge towards him.
Floyd ran towards a tree as fast as a charging rhinoceros. Leaping into its branches …

… and there he still sits, stuck in the tree.

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