Tuesday, 17 June 2014

WALT ... use similes

An Apple Poem
My apple is as colourful as burning flames.
It feels like my duvet cover pulled tight.
It has dents like my car bonnet.
It looks as bright as the first three colours of the rainbow.
My apple smells like a sour lolly, but tastes like a sweet one.
It crunches like a cracker, and is as juicy as a trickling stream.

Co-constructed in the Kea Room during a poetry workshop.
Published by Kimberley

2 comments:

  1. Your apple sounds delicious and fun to eat! Great writing

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  2. I like it too! Paige :)

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